Apr 22, 2009

With or Without You

Quote of the post: ""You(You) have the power with me(I) to make it us(We)." - Quote about You - Sachin Kumar Gupta

At the first, I started thinking about u within You. Like 'Quality is incomplete without u.' But then I thought, It will be too much to have the last vowel - u. I don't want bulk of u. Everyone writes about me, I am putting something in poetic words (I tried) not about u, but about You.


I feel younger with you.
I feel more joyous with you.
I feel younker with you.

that's why I care you.

Layout can't exist without you.
Bayou can't move without you.
Youth can't have power without You.

that's why I cherish you.

Sometimes I feel amyous with you.
Sometimes I feel embryous with you.
Sometimes I feel annoyous with you.

Even though, I am incomplete without you.
that's why I admire you.

Buyout is not possible without you.
Tryout is really tough without you.
Payout is tasteless without you.

that's why I need you.

You always have you in your wor[l]d.
YouTube - video sharing site, can't be without You.
I am sure, youse are not bored of you.

that's why I love you.

This is something about you,
be it with you, or without you.
In yourself, feel the power of you.

that's why I dream you.

- Yourn (Yours) Sachin Kumar Gupta (Sach)

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12 comments:

  1. nice...u have a great control on ur words

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  2. an unusual "u" poem :D , gr8 creativity

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  4. You me aur hum...this "you poem" was great dude..

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  5. A very different poem. good creativity. nice work!
    Neetu.

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  6. Liked ... liked ... liked :)

    A different yet nice poem !!

    Btw check out my blog too :

    http://www.sourav-pandey.blogspot.com/

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  7. Hi Sachin,
    very original. i like it. very good attempt.keep it up.

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  8. awesome..I liked it..something new :)

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  9. Hi Sachin,
    Regarding your comment on my blog, you may note that even Amitabh Bachan has mentioned in his blog : http://bigb.bigadda.com/. Even TOI has an article on that. This is just FYI since you are young and of an impressionable age and may think that i have offended some sensibilities.
    But still i will say this. I still respect your view.

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  10. YOU..............
    nice work done by YOU....
    really good.....

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  11. its really nice.........
    it vibrate my strings.

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  12. You write nice poems.

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